You
want to write, but what on earth
do you do first? Well, if you want to write, then, dammit,
write! Start with something achievable, perhaps a short story,
and start with a genre and a subject that you're familiar
with. Don't write science fiction if you've only ever read
one science fiction story in your life. Don't write romance
because you somewhat depreciatingly think it's easy. Pick
a genre and a subject you:
- admire;
- know
something (preferably a great deal of something) about;
- feel
a real enthusiasm for.
In
the early 1990s I stupidly thought I'd make a killing
writing light romance. Easy, I thought. No matter
that I thought light romance was stuff for fools.
No matter that I hadn't read a light romance since
I was fourteen. What happened? I failed miserably.
It was bloody hard. I wrote some three novels in the
light romance vein, and they are all laughable. That's
not the genre's fault, it's mine. Light romance is
as difficult or as easy to write as crime or science
fiction; what makes the difference is the author's
attitude and experience, and I failed on both counts.
So
don't pick something because you think it will be
easy. Pick something because you like it and are familiar
with it.
You
must accept that most of what you first write won't
be any good (this is the hardest thing to accept).
Perhaps most of what you write for months or even
years won't be much good. That's okay. The important
thing is that you are writing, and you are learning
as you go. You will become more familiar and more
comfortable with the pacing of plots, with the intricacies
of dialogue and with the development of characters
the more you do it. I wrote close to six or seven
novels, all of which are unpublishable, before I had
learned enough to write something that was
publishable (although I also completely changed the
genre I was writing in as well, and that helped).
Maybe I'm a slow learner, but I needed the experience
of those novels behind me to eventually write something
that worked ... and that I could sell.
Short
stories I can give no advice on at all, because I've
only just begun to write short stories. I cut my teeth
on novel writing, so that's what I'll concentrate
on here.
Establishing
a Discipline of Writing
Writing
must be one of the most disciplined professions on
earth: it has to be, because without discipline
nothing will ever get done. As I explain on my page
on discipline in the bath
(you have to read that page to understand the title!),
I find writing very hard, and literally have to force
myself to do it. Getting that first draft down is
very, very difficult. Personally I find that the only
way I can write is to disipline myself into a routine,
and I think most writers have their own discipline
and routine. You have to find your own routine, but
once you find one that works for you, then you have
to discipline yourself to keep to it, and not to waver
and wander. If you set aside Saturday to write, then
write on Saturday, don't keep running out to do the
shopping, or going off for a few hours to watch the
kids' football. If you set aside one day a week to
write, then be totally selfish - that is your day
to write, and nothing comes between you and
your writing.
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You
not only have to be disciplined in setting aside time (and
then being selfish enough to insist on keeping that time to
yourself and your writing), but you must be disciplined in
ensuring you are constantly moving forward in your writing.
Don't waste yourself in constant revising and rewriting until
you have a first draft done. As I mention elsewhere, I've
watched friends constantly revise the first half of a novel
for year after year, and they won't accept that they will
never finish that novel. I've been in the same position. You
write a bit, then you succumb to the temptation to go back
and revise it. Just a bit. It won't take long.
A
decade later (I jest not) you realise you've squandered every
chance you may ever have had to actually write a book. All
you have is ten years' worth of revisions to the first three
chapters (or whatever).
MOVE
FORWARD. PUT THOSE DAMN WORDS DOWN ON PAPER. Write, and keep
writing until an entire draft is done. Then you can (and,
indeed, you must) revise it. Steeling yourself to constantly
move forward is something you must do.
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The
First Novel
The
hardest lesson to learn is that your first novel will
undoubtedly be dreadful. You must be prepared
to let your first novel go. Face the fact that one
day you're going to have to turn off the life support
systems.
This
is hard. Planning, writing and completing a novel
is an achievement in itself, and the first-time novelist
is generally so emotionally attached to his or her
creation they are incapable of seeing it with objective
eyes. I have a friend who has been reworking her first
novel for the past 7 years ... she won't let go, she
won't accept that she must move on, and she can't
see that she has virtually ruined any chance she has
of ever succeeding in actually completing a publishable
work. No-one amateur painter expects his or her first
work to be a masterpiece (and keep reworking the same
canvas for year after year) ... so why do amateur
writers?
Some
98% of manuscripts are rejected by publishers. My
guess is that the majority of those are first-time
novels whose authors have no idea, or who can't accept,
how bad they are.
It
took me some five years to realise that my first novel
was so bad it would never be published. Its worth
lay not in whether it would or would not be published,
but in what it taught me. Once I accepted the fact
that it would be easier (and better) to start a new
project than continue to try to resuscitate the First
Novel, I took the first great big step towards success.
The
second attempt at a novel was easier to let go - and
that made it easier for me to view it objectively
and learn from its mistakes.
By
the third novel I knew what I was doing, and I think
by that stage I'd accepted that I was in a learning
mode rather than in a 'get-rich-and-famous-quick'
mode. I think I typed in the final fullstop, then
closed the file without a single emotional twinge,
and instantly began work on the fourth novel.
I
was on a roll. I'd managed to remove myself enough
from my writing to be able to view it objectively,
to recognise instantly when something wasn't working,
and by this stage I had enough experience to know
what to do to correct it.
I
was still writing romance, but I knew that this genre
was not for me. The excitement was building, because
I knew I was close to a breakthrough.
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The
Breakthrough
The
breakthrough for me was finding the perfect genre for my style
of writing and for the peculiar and often dark shape of my
mind. Fantasy. I've read a fair bit of it over the years,
but it's certainly not my favourite genre (what is my favourite?
Military adventure fantasy - Tom Clancy, for example, or mystery
and crime). The day I thought, "Why not try fantasy?" it felt
so right that I instinctively knew this was going to
be my best chance at success.
From
the moment I wrote the first chapter of BattleAxe I
thought it had a really good chance ... my practice runs gave
me the experience I needed to recognise saleable worth when
I wrote it.
But
there was something else about BattleAxe that made
it different. This one I wrote almost exclusively for myself,
whereas all the other novels I did with an 'audience' in mind.
BattleAxe I LOVED writing. I lived that book, and it
lived for me. Consequently it lives for most (not all, she
grins, remembering the odd review) of my readers. So if it
works for you, then it may well work for others ... but again,
you've got to balance involvement with objectivity.
What
To Do With It Now?
So
you've finished the piece that you think may see you through
into book signings and pleasant conversations with your bank
manager. What to do with it now?
First,
take a deep breath, put it in a drawer, and forget about it
for about two, or even six, months. Then take it out, view
it with a fresh eye, and revise it ferociously. Make yourself
see all the bits that don't work, and force yourself to change
them. Authors always find it hard to change a single word
of their masterpiece, but, believe me, masterpeices can always
be improved (if you can't find much wrong with your manuscript,
then it's probably so awful it should be burnt). The more
improved your manuscript is, and the more professional (and
professionally presented) it is, the greater chance you will
have of being published. It's a hectic world out there, peopled
by agents and editors who are overworked and underpaid, and
the first thing that catches their eyes is professionalism.
They don't have time for anything but.
You
can also have a look at the many books available on the market
on how to write.
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